From You Are Here: Personal Geographies and Other Maps of the Imagination by Katharine Harmon, this image was created by graphic designer Tibor Kalman to promote a NYC restaurant. (Click on image to see larger size.)
Notice one napkin on the floor, the other curving onto a lap. See how the forks are held, take in the atmosphere of mirth.
Try mapping a still-shot of one of your scenes … noticing details like these along the way … then write out a first draft.